meh
quite a bore, actually, without much in the line of melody. That aside, it's creepy, kind of evil, so it definitely cause a feeling in the listener which is good. I'd say melody and climax are needed to create a great piece, but I've been wrong before. I don't know if it would help this piece much...
to each their own, mate. : D
Seriously, why can't you give it up?
I've seen people admit that their music isn't really theirs, and others got of their back, like the Mortal Kombat theme song. If you would just admit that you stoll it instead of attacking everyone that reviews it, especially when evidence has been provided, you might get a break. I can tell that your msic is recorded because the quality practically screams it. Just admit you lied.
A little bit too generic
To break away from typical is difficult though. You do have an overall unique melody, but different sounds would be a large improvement. (Love the echoy sound, though)
Too long, dude, too LOOOoong....
The intro kept me suspended for about 45 seconds, then I began wonderin' where the pickup was, and when a change did come, disapointment followed. It's in desperate need of a pickup and climax. If I were you, I'd remake this: keep a small part of the intro, then pick it up, up, up!!! You could easily get a 9/10 if you tried.
FINISH IT!
I really want to hear it finalized. The begining till 00:50 was my favorite part.
you didn't like the addition of the drums?
UNDESERVING!!!
I don't think voiuce demos belong in the top 30. Good variation, though.
Wait... I'm getting a low score because I'm in the top 30?
Lacking
Needs a heavier climax or none at all, not a half-job. Don't get me wrong, it's a beautiful composition, but it could be so much better than what you have now.
without skipping a beat
usually, I turn away from the sounds you chose, but the melody pulled me in. Aptly chosen name. I'm not sure i'm into the cheering crowd, though.
lackingly unique
So you made it your own, without any obvious refence. Honestly, it wasn't very enjoyable. Braching out is wonderful in my opinion, but only when the branch bears fruit.
Well thanks for taking the time to review.. but i read your other reviews... Who are you?
Some words I choose to describe myself include artistic, talkative, plotter, lunatical, bread sticks, laxatives, incorruptible, intelligent, yo-yo, and... wait, are those even descriptors? I need a new script writer...
Age 33, Male
Joined on 3/24/08
Miles Of Snow