good, but needs improvement
The buildup at the begining was a bit too long. An alternative would be to make another slow part between the faster paced stuff. I also thought the climax was weak, not much stronger than the begining. It also seemed generic with the triple beats. This piece definately has potential to be something amazing, though. The sounds were very cool, and the overall composition and melody was pretty good.
It's an old tune and for the most part I agree with you. I could probably make it something much better sounding right now, perhaps I'll do that...
Like it
I like the fact that the melody dosn't deviate from the overall feeling. The sound componants are blended perfectly! The composition is straightforward, exposing emotions specific to the concept. Well made for its purpose. The one thing negative I have to say is that there is very little in the line of a climax. An overly large climax might be a little imposing, though, so I would recomend making it a tad shorter, so as not to lose an audiences' attention.
Loved it
I especially liked the part between 1:00 and 3:24. I would like to see an entire composition derived from that section, rather than it thrown in with other parts in a compilation. In other words, I'm not sure three tone shifts did too well without a full circle ending. Cloud control was the same (I only like the fast-paced begining). Other than that, it was fricken amazing.
Like a painting
What I love about your music is how well it tells a story. Everything I've heard of yours paints a picture in my head, and a beautiful picture at that. Well done!
Very well composed
It's kind of spooky, and the tone is consistant. I like it!
Liked it from the first measure
Very, very good composition, great feel. It makes me happy to see well made compositions like this.
If it made you happy, I'm happy. That's why I make music. :)
Thanks for the review!
Great
One of the VERY few pieces to earn a 5/5 from me. Great lively feel, smooth and flowing composition, variety but with consistancy. Well done. the closing is the only thing I'd change.
good
I'm not sure why, but the instruments don't blend very well. The bass is also a bit lacking. The overall composition is decent, though.
Not bad, not great
It dosn't sound FULL, if you take my meaning. The composition, though consitant, is too widespread for the few instruments used. The tone also has a pretty dramatic change early on, causing a bit of confusion. 3/5, 6/10
Full? I think I understand what you mean there. Do you think doubling up strings with some of the instruments would've helped it?
Love the feel
It has an upbeat quality without actually being fast, very neat.
Thanks man, glad you liked it.
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