Always inspiring!
You manage to create some of the most moving pieces I know. The tempo, the feel, the sounds! It actually sounds like there's some sort of stage setup going on, better even. The elements are placed so well, so smoothly... Epic, just epic.
Thank you for the kind words and the review, I really appreciate it :)
Like the melody, but
IT NEEDS MORE BASS!!! It's a bit to repetitive, and the buildups don't really lead to anything. I love the sounds you used, though.
Thanks for the review. I'll be sure to try some more bass next time.
Try again! I see potential!
Personally, I think the original is better despite the low sound quality it had. This has too many sounds going on, not exactly consistent with itself. I do like the background, though. I just wish the treble was something to smile at... I also feel that this needs to be faster, though it may be the overcast feeling that slows it down more than the actual tempo. I really hope that you try this again. This was my favorite piece from fury 3, and I'd love to here what it'd sound like in high quality. By no means does that mean copy directly, but I strongly recommend strengthening the foreground, using less "squeaky" sounds and buzz-tones, and ditch the quote at 0:53. I think this has potential.
Hey thanks. This was my first piece I've ever done, mind you, and I do plan to redo it, I just need motivation because I did this with the demo therefore could not save it. This one was really just throwing some things together; I didn't really try to hard and only spent about an hour or two on it.
Btw, I love fury 3 music and plan to remix more tracks from it. I've already done Tiamat but I plan to do Sebek next, although that one will be a bit of a challenge.
good, but needs improvement
The buildup at the begining was a bit too long. An alternative would be to make another slow part between the faster paced stuff. I also thought the climax was weak, not much stronger than the begining. It also seemed generic with the triple beats. This piece definately has potential to be something amazing, though. The sounds were very cool, and the overall composition and melody was pretty good.
It's an old tune and for the most part I agree with you. I could probably make it something much better sounding right now, perhaps I'll do that...
Liked it from the first measure
Very, very good composition, great feel. It makes me happy to see well made compositions like this.
If it made you happy, I'm happy. That's why I make music. :)
Thanks for the review!
Not bad, not great
It dosn't sound FULL, if you take my meaning. The composition, though consitant, is too widespread for the few instruments used. The tone also has a pretty dramatic change early on, causing a bit of confusion. 3/5, 6/10
Full? I think I understand what you mean there. Do you think doubling up strings with some of the instruments would've helped it?
Love the feel
It has an upbeat quality without actually being fast, very neat.
Thanks man, glad you liked it.
meh
quite a bore, actually, without much in the line of melody. That aside, it's creepy, kind of evil, so it definitely cause a feeling in the listener which is good. I'd say melody and climax are needed to create a great piece, but I've been wrong before. I don't know if it would help this piece much...
to each their own, mate. : D
FINISH IT!
I really want to hear it finalized. The begining till 00:50 was my favorite part.
you didn't like the addition of the drums?
UNDESERVING!!!
I don't think voiuce demos belong in the top 30. Good variation, though.
Wait... I'm getting a low score because I'm in the top 30?
Some words I choose to describe myself include artistic, talkative, plotter, lunatical, bread sticks, laxatives, incorruptible, intelligent, yo-yo, and... wait, are those even descriptors? I need a new script writer...
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